I've Got My Eyes On You

Written by Mary Higgins Clark

Review written by Gwen Moffat

Gwen Moffat lives in Cumbria. Her novels are set in remote communities ranging from the Hebrides to the American West. The crimes fit their environment, swelling that dreadful record of sin in the smiling countryside cited by Sherlock Holmes.


I've Got My Eyes On You
Simon & Schuster
RRP: £7.99
Released: January 10, 2019
Pbk

An old school cosy brought up to date, and politically correct, with one of the main characters a boy-man, twenty years old, with special needs, whom everyone, including the author, treats with kid gloves.

The story opens with him, Jamie, at his bedroom window, watching his idol, Kerry, the girl next door, clearing the poolside after a party to which he was not invited because he wasn’t a school colleague. But although himself a close and interested observer Jamie misreads actions and is unaware of consequences so that when Kerry is hit and falls, to float in the water, he goes down to join her on the swim.  When she doesn’t respond to him he gives up and goes home to bed, hiding his wet pants and sneakers – which are found shortly by his mother.

Plot and action follow predictably, every careful diversion, every Stop sign, signalled ahead, leading to the next turn. Forensics show Kerry’s skull was fractured by a heavy blow, the weapon a golf club found on a chaise longue (where Jamie had placed it for tidiness). Questioned, it transpires that Jamie had witnessed Kerry’s boyfriend, Alan, returning  to the pool after the party, which would have made Alan the prime suspect except that his three buddies swear to his alibi, thus turning the spotlight on poor Jamie. This transforms his arthritic and possessive middle-aged mum into a raging tigress, tearing apart the respectable Cape Cod neighbourhood, disrupting the high school: its students, their parents and the authorities.

Investigating the murder is an unassuming cop,  Mike Wilson, who finds an essential ally (and the love interest) in Aline, the murdered girl’s older sister. Being a youthful counsellor at the high school Aline is in the best position to ferret out and explore some  momentous secret that is causing trepidation , even terror in certain quarters, a secret which has to be the core of the plot.

In this novel the need to remain correct, and not only politically, means there are no jokes. There is one glimmer of humour when a first time prisoner, upper class and sheltered, asks of an old lag: “Is food something you ask for, or do they bring it when they’re ready?”

For the rest chapters are short, the style polished, the dialogue inoffensive. The author is in her advanced years and writing for her age group for whom she ticks all the boxes.



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